Love Can Bite *Series update* | Comments

everything was good but there was some tiny spelling mistakes!!^.^ please part 9

This story was amazing. Why do you want to restart? So what if it was your sisters? It is an amazing story and I loved it which is a big thing coming from me. But anyway, It's your decision, just don't change jake.... I mean, yeah.... :/ ol^_^lo...... lol

I love this story dont edit anything it is perfect just please continue, and maybe make the story parts longer

Well, you don't really have to delete them , you could just edit the words (perhaps make multiple endings) like if you like Connor then make a result wherein what does Connor think about you. The story looks okay but, I couldn't understand it a bit. Sorry if my opinions were harsh :( or maybe you could ask someone to help you with it

What do you mean by editing like checking for parts that are like inappropriate for people to read. By the way........ NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!! I'm also planing on making a series,which is gonna be the first.

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