Love can Bite part 6 | Comments

I did the contest and u didnt pick meh :'(

I couldn't find part five... so I'm really sad and confused

I have tan skin auburn hair am 5ft3 I want to be a good vampire that conner falls in love with and my name is ivory

I took your series, and I'm glad you did shift away from text speak because putting that in stories is a bit of a pet peeve of mine. The only other thing I would suggest is slowing down the pace of your story a tad so that you can include more details and description. The plot sounds interesting (as does the bad guy...) and the guy choices seem to my liking ;) I'll look out for part 7 :)