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  • Um wth was this supposed to be about?

    Bobcat
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  • Hai! I really think you should slow down while you are writing. Take the time to look things over and this could be great. About half the words were misspelled, which made it kinda hard to understand. Otherwise, good job!!

    Isabel Star
    1
  • You moved way too fast. This was poorly written and awful.

    u545
    1
  • This is a great start! Maybe explain things a tiny bit slower; as a guideline, you should take xxblutixx's story series Don't Leave Me Hanging. It's SO awesome! Can't wait to take the rest of your quizzes :)

    Flight
    1
  • K! Thanks! I think I'll do that! You've become my best story friend...XD

    *Ray*

    Reanna15146
    1
  • This is really good already and I didn't really see anything worth improving on! Maybe for the rest of the parts put the guys description in the first paragraph and the girls descriptions in the second paragraph. (The ones nobody really reads not as questions) good beginning!

    Twisted_Roots
    1
  • Ok. So, plz comment and rate and be NICE!!!! and also, give me some advice for improvement!

    *Ray*

    Reanna15146
    1

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