Hogwarts Love Story pt 2 | Comments

In my opinion, this series looks like it is going to be one of my favourite Hogwart's Love Stories so far! Seriously, I love the way that you write, and I can't wait for the next part! Also, thank you for the shout out in both of your quizzes! :-)

I stand by everything I said on your first quiz. One thing though, if the main character is the same age as Harry and co., then Voldermort would have been dead by the time she was five. Perhaps go and re-visit the comment I left on your first quiz, as you could still improve upon those areas. Try not to use excessive capital letters or exclamation marks.

'NOOOOO!!!!!'

Doesn't look very professional. Just a small thing, but it makes your quiz look more mature.

XD