Hogwarts Love Story pt 28 | Comments
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@hp4evr I'm really glad you think that my writing has improved, and I'm pleased that you enjoyed the juicy bits of this edition! Ha ha! I enjoy making up stupid names for horrible characters. And I'm trying to keep Cailey a little more light-hearted through this year, as I couldn't help but notice when I read the Order of the Pheonix that it was a really dark and miserable year.
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I completely agree, you have improved a lot and gone a long way, this coming from me as a reader. I only found your writing at the end of last year, along with Nat's so I had a shorter span of time to judge all of the writing. Though I think almost all the writers here started this way, including @natuhleegayle, even hers had plot holes in the beginning, and so did @HogwartsLove's, and both of them are amazing writers; there are exceptions still. Regarding this edition, I enjoyed and loved it, especially the details. If you didn't know, I prefer fat, juicy books, so I'm naturally drawn towards details. Also, I was literally laughing when I read "Toad-Lady". XD So funny! Besides being amazing, your writing also has humour and I believe in a few years, it would be matching J.K.R.'s.
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@music826 That's ok. I appreciate your support nevertheless, and I'm glad you don't mind what I'm doing with the story at the moment. I'll have a little bit more action in the next few!
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I was so ecstatic to see this edition out on the new quizzes list today. Yes, you are following the book quite closely, but it's still an entertaining read. I've written so many comments today I've sort of run out of things to say, so I'll just leave it at the fact that I can't wait for part 29!
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