Too Young For Love, Yeah Right (part 11)

Well this is the eleventh part of this story that I worked all morning on and part of last night. Well a lot of things happen in this part since its twice as long as the last part!

I made this part longer since my last part was shorter and some of you were upset so I did my best and made this part longer and more interesting and best of all..... In your Point of View! Enjoy!

Created by: Nialler34
  1. (My last part was really short so I made this part longer than any of the others, plus many surprises await you in this part!)
  2. ***YOUR P.O.V*** The night after you broke up with Nathan you were a mess. You couldn't sleep, you felt as though you just broke somebody's heart. That morning you mom knocked on your door, she asked if she could come in. You didn't reply to her but she came in anyway. "_____, whats wrong?" she asked in a mannered way. You put the blanket over your head. "Seriously whats wrong?" you mom asked your more serious than she was before. You moved the blanket from your face. You muttered very quietly "Nathan" then you put the blanket over your face. "Who is Nathan?" she asked apparently hearing you with her super hearing, she doesn't really have super hearing its a joke. "A boy, that I liked we dated for a while, I broke up with him" you said confessing what really happened. "Was Nathan one of the boys who visited you at the hospital?" she asked. "Yes" you said. "Which one?" she asked. "The one who kissed me" you said embarrassingly. He eyes just widened. "Oh, honey do you want to go to school?" you mom said feeling sympathy for you. Right away you said "No." "Well last night me and your father wanted to tell you, that Erik was moving here from Wisconsin" you mother said to you. Right away you were excited. Erik was your best guy friend from when you lived in Wisconsin. "Really?" you said getting really excited. "Yes, he'll be here soon about 2 hours" your mom said with a cheery voice. "I have to get ready" you said. Then you and your mom shared a hug and she left your room for you to get ready for Erik.
  3. Erik had red hair, dark green eyes, and light colored skin. He was about the same height as Nathan maybe a little shorter but not by much. Since you went to an all girl she school while you lived in Wisconsin you didn't have much guy friends. Erik was next door neighbor and pretty much the only boy you were allowed to hang out with. You guys did a lot of fun stuff together like go to the movies, get pizza, throw eggs at the teachers you hated most houses. You and Erik never were together though, not like together, together, but you two had a strong relationship that nobody could break. When you found out that you were moving away from Wisconsin you were devastated that you had to move away from all your friends including Erik. Well when you got ready it was about 15 minutes before he was about to arrive. Your father even seemed excited. "Your mother told me what happened and why you were upset" he said with a monotonous voice. "Oh" you said. "As long as your broke up with him I'm fine" he said still with his monotonous tone. Then their was knock at the door. You rushed to open it. It was Erik. "Oh my gosh!" you practically yelled.
  4. He just did a calm and collected smile and you two hugged. You missed him a lot. "So how are you?" he asked. "Great even better that you are back!" you said excitingly. "Same here, you mind showing me around town, I am moving here after all" he asked. You just nodded your head happily. Then he gave you father that questioning nod. Then you father smiled and nodded. You two then ran out the door. "I missed you" Erik said. "I missed you to" you said. "Why aren't you in school?" he asked "Why aren't you in school?" you asked with an emphasis on you. "I'm enrolled in the same school you are but I don't start until tomorrow." he said "Oh, well I'm not in school because its a long complicated story but I'll go tomorrow if you going" you said. "Whats the long complicated story?" Erik asked. "I really don't want to talk about it right now, do you wanna go to "˜That Coffee Place'?" you asked Erik. "Which coffee place?" he asked with a cute confused voice. "That Coffee Place, thats what its actually called" you said curing his confusion. "Oh that explains it" he said. "Yeah well lets go then" you said grabbing his arm and dragging him. "Lets go" he said.
  5. When you two got to That Coffee Place it was already 10:20a.m school ended at 3:15p.m so you had a lot more time before the streets were filled with annoying teens like you. You both ordered what you wanted to order and sat down at a random booth. "So, anything interesting happen while I wasn't in Wisconsin?" you asked Erik. "Eh, nothing much, same old, same old" he said. "Oh cool" you said. "I want to know what that long complicated story is" Erik said jumping up and down in his seat like a toddler. "Its long and complicated" you said with a deep sigh. "I still want to know" he said. "Well it all started on the first day of school" you said and then stared continuing on with your story getting the major details and whenever Erik was confused he would stop you and ask. The major details you put in there were the fight between Adam and Dante at the beginning of the year, Nathan telling you how it started, you and Nathan ditching and then kissing the next day, Team C.R.A.C.K, you and Nathan's "date" at the park which turned into a bad day for Adam, the stalker dude, everything about Kevin and Drake, you and Nathan at the hospital, you and Nathan dating, and Adam ditching and the two guys from prison, you and Nathan's big break up.You told him every little detail too.
  6. After you had finished Erik had that shocked look on his face. "So you dated a guy?" he asked. "Umm yeah" you said embarrassed. "So you ditched with a guy and he beat up two a bunch of guy from prison with his bad a** fighting skills?" Erik asked. "Yep" you said. "And you know a guy with anger issues that has a major crush on you?" he asked. "Yeah to all of those" you said. "When can I meet them?" he asked. "Tomorrow, most likely" you said looking out the window. "I'd love to meet a guy with issues, your ex, and your karate hero" he said with a huge smile. "Shut up" you said playfully hitting his shoulder. You looked at your phone clock it was already 12:01p.m "Wow were were hear for about 2 hours" you said. Then he looked at his phone. "Yeah wow, oh can I have your number" Erik asked you. "Um yeah" then you gave it to him and he gave you his. "_____, its getting pretty really boring here, we should go" Erik said getting up. "Yeah, where do you want to go next" you asked. "I don't know your the one that has lived here for five weeks" Erik said. "Yeah, I guess thats true" you said. "Hey is there a sushi place somewhere I love sushi and its lunchtime" Erik said getting excited. "I'm not allowed there" you said. "Why?" he asked. You forgot to tell him how you and Team C.R.A.C.K got kicked out and weren't allowed there ever again. "Well Dante got pissed at Nathan and he threw sushi at him then they started yelling and then we got kicked out" you said. "Oh, remind me never to go out with you and them" Erik said jokingly and laughing. You just gave him a smile.
  7. "Well where should we go then?" Erik asked. Just then a lightbulb went on in your head. "Come on" you said grabbing Erik's hand. "Where we going?" Erik asked letting you drag him along. "A house to check on something, but its gonna take us awhile to get there" you said. "Whose house? Erik said. "Somebody's now like I said its going to take a while what should we talk about" you said letting go of his hand. "How are the teachers like at out school?" he asked. "Oh there cool, some more than others" you responded. "Just like ours, hey if I find a teacher I don't like wanna throw eggs at there house" Erik said excitingly. "Yeah, maybe Adam, Dante, and Nathan could join us" you said adding on to his excitement but instead of getting more excited he lost most of it. "I thought it was out thing just us ok" he said "Yeah ok sure, do you have your schedule yet" you said. "Yeah its in my pocket, want to see it" he asked. "Yeah I'd love too" you said taking it from him. You examined it, you only had two classes with him, 3rd and 5th period. "We only have two classes together" you said sadly. "Aww I was looking forward to having more with you" he said sadly too. The best thing about them was none of the guys had those classes with you. You looked at your phone you got a text it was from Dante. Erik was looking at you with a suspicious while you read it. The text said "The rest of Team C.R.A.C.K are going to the mall after school if you want to come, bring your skateboard, hope I see you there :D" Dante texted. You knew how to skateboard you wanted to go but what kind of friend would you be if you left Erik alone.
  8. "Who was it from?" Erik asked you. "Umm my mom, she said she wants us back home by 6" you lied. "Oh" he said. Again you looked at your phone to see what time it was. It was 1:45p.m. You had finally gotten to the house you had wanted to get to. (It was CLIFFHANGER!!!!!! Hahahaha not really I'm continuing with the story now. ) The house you and Erik had spent forever getting to was the school hahahaha it wasn't really a house you had lied to Erik. "The school?" Erik said with a confused look. "Yep" you said confidently. "We walked an hour just to get to the stupid school, and now your paying for my medical bills if my legs die" Erik said going from serious to a sarcastic voice. You just started laughing. "Well since we have about 4 more years till we get a drivers license your going to have to deal with it, once I walked all the way across town and back" you said. "Remind me never to walk with you and the rest of your friends" Erik said. "Get use to it" you said once again. "So where do you live?" you asked Erik since he never showed you. "Next door to you" he said. "Again! Thats great just like old times" you said. "Yeah but the old times are in the past lets make new memories" Erik said. "Like what?" you asked. "I don't know what is there to do here?" he asked. "Not much but if you do anything really serious you could get shot" you said. "Ha ha ha really funny not be serious" Erik said probably thinking you were kidding about getting shot.
  9. "Its true, didn't you hear what happened to Tyler" you asked Erik. "No what happened to him" Erik asked. You told him the story about Alice Irvin, Drake and horror movie 101. He just gave you a confused look. "Yeah you need to go to our school in order to actually understand it" you said to Erik. "Ok then, lets walk around some more I don't care if my legs die show me around some more" Erik said. "I have a better idea" you said with another light bulb going off. "What?" Erik asked. "Come on lets get some skittles" you said. Then you guys walked to the store and bought some skittles. "What are we going to do eat them?" Erik asked after you bought them. "No we are going to thrown them at random people and cars" you said deviously. "Really thats not that fun" Erik said. You gave him a weird look like how is that not fun! "And we are going to yell Taste The Rainbow!" you said. "Thats more funner" Erik said. "Thats bad grammar" you said to Erik. "If I wanted grammar lessons I would have stayed at home unpacking with my mom" Erik said taking the package of skittles from your hand and opening them. "Who should I throw these at first" Erik said looking around. "Him!" you yelled pointing at a guy who looked like he was in his mid-twenties. He threw one. He got the guy right in the chest. You both started laughing then running away from the spot.
  10. "I can't believe you actually did that!" you yelled at Erik after you lost sight of the guy. "Well then we would be wasting skittles" Erik said sarcastically. "We are wasting skittles by throwing them at people" you said nudging him. "You got a point, now you try" Erik said handing a couple of skittles to you. You looked around you saw a guy around the same age as the last one, but he looked more dangerous. "Throw one at him!" Erik said pointing at the guy. "Not him, lets throw one at a different guy" you said turning around. "I'll do it then" Erik said taking your skittles and throwing them at the guy. He hit him in the face with it. He looked right at us. "You mother f---ers!" the guy yelled at us seriously angry. "Uh-oh" Erik said slowly walking away. He suddenly started running at you two. "Should we run?" you asked Erik. "No we should ask the guy if we can settle this peacefully" Erik said sarcastically. "Ok I'll ask him" you said starting to walk up to the running guy. "I was being sarcastic now run before you get us killed!" Erik said grabbing your wrist and started running. After you ran for a while the guy finally gave up and stopped. "Whew that was close" Erik said breathing heavily. "I've been in way worse" you said. He have you a serious look. "Yeah I bet you have" he said. He took out his phone and said it was 3:30. "Wow time flies" Erik said. "Yeah we should head home" you said. "Aww I don't wanna unpack" Erik said. "I'll help you and your parents now lets go" you said. "Fine, lets start walking then.
  11. You were walking home talking to Erik about random stuff when you noticed a few boys walking your way. It looked like Adam, Dante, and Nathan. "Thats them" you muttered to Erik. "That who?" Erik said looking the way your were looking. "Adam, Nathan, Dante" you said again staring at them. "Oh that them, which ones your ex?" he asked. "The tall one" you said. "Oh, which one is the karate dude?" he asked again. "The blonde one" you replied. "And I'm guessing the other one is Dante?" he asked again. "Yeah you guessed right" you said. Then Dante started waving you waved back. Nathan looked like he was sick, you probably looked the same. Adam looked like he had just been chased. They were probably thinking who the hell Erik was. Dante was still waving happily when Adam hit his chest and it looked like he said stop. "Should we walk towards them?" Erik asked you. "Yeah we should" you said starting to walk towards them. You finally got close enough to them to talk to them. "Hi" Adam said awkwardly. "Hi, whats up" you replied to him. "Nothing much just tired and worn out" he replied. They didn't take their eyes off Erik. "Oh thats Erik" you said awkwardly. "I'm Erik" Erik said. The guys still seemed confused. "Were friends in Wisconsin and he just moved here" you said. "Ohhh" Adam and Nathan said. "You lived in Wisconsin?" Dante said. Everybody just gave him that look like where have you been the last few weeks. "Am I the only one that didn't know that?" Dante said. We all just nodded our heads. "Well now I know" Dante said. "I'll shut up now, I'm the only one talking" Dante said shutting up. You noticed that Nathan was holding him other arm. "What happened to your arm, Nathan?" you asked him. "I umm I uh umm I-" then Adam cut in "He fell off his skateboard at the mall, I'll explain that to, well we all went to the mall and skateboarded we Nathan fell off when a security dude saw him" Adam said. "Oh, that makes perfect sense" you said. "Oh sarcastic ______, I'll explain it better later." Dante said. You just gave Nathan an awkward smile. "Well nice to meet you" Erik said finally speaking.
  12. "Oh uh yeah nice to meet you" Adam and Dante said at about the same time. "Are you ok?" you asked Nathan "You aren't talking much?" "Yeah I'm fine, just upset, can we talk about this alone?" Nathan asked finally speaking in a complete sentence. "I'll catch up with you later ______, I have to go home see ya, I'm hungry can you give me the rest of the-" then you threw him the skittles and he walked off. "Why did you have skittles in your pocket?" Adam asked. "Oh its a long story, that almost got us killed" you said. His eyes just widened "Umm" Nathan muttered. "Yeah I'll be right back then" you said, then Nathan said the same thing. "Hi" Nathan said when you got far enough away from Adam and Dante that they couldn't hear you anymore. "Its kinda a little late to say that now" you said. "Oh well" he said. "What did you want to say?" you asked him. "We are still good friends right?" Nathan asked messing with his hands. "Yeah, still great friends" you said. "Good, now thats all I wanted to ask" he said blushing.
  13. After you had that short talk with Nathan you went back to Adam and Dante. "What were the skittles about?" Dante asked. "Well me and Erik were bored so we bought them threw them at a couple people one guy cussed at us and chased us for a while and almost murdered us but we are ok" you said proudly. "Oh, that sounds like fun" Dante said. "Yeah it was" you said. "I have to go" Adam said "My mom said she had a surprise for me at home" he continued. "Bye Adam have fun with whatever surprise you mom has waiting for you" you said to him waving good bye. "Same I gots to go to" Nathan said "Bye to both of you" Dante said. Then those two walked away. "I should probably help Erik unpack at his house, bye" you said then Dante said "Hey, can I walk with you?" "Yeah sure" you answered. Then you started walking home which was also next to Erik. "Are you and that guy like, you know together?" Dante asked randomly. "No, we are just really good friends why did you ask?" you asked. "Umm cause you didn't come to school today and you seemed like you were walking around town with him all day" he said answering your question. "I didn't go to school all day because I thought it would be awkward between me and you-know-who and I walked around him Erik because I haven't seen him in a while and the last time we talked was when we were both in Wisconsin, understand?" you explained. "Yeah I understand better now" "Good" you said. Then you walked home without another word when you were about a block away. "______" Dante said. "Yeah" you replied. "I've always wanted to do this" he said shyly. "Do what?" you said with a smile. "This" then he leaned in and kissed you lightly on the lips. You wanted to yell at him but something about seemed, seemed, well good.
  14. You were blinking excessively, while Dante just stared at you. "Sorry, sorry" Dante said almost starting to walk away. "Wait!" you yelled at him. "What?" he said while confused. Then you leaned in to kiss him more. It wasn't a peck like Dante had given you, it was more passionate. It lasted for long while, but a too long. Maybe a little longer than a minute. It stopped. Dante had a confused look. "Why?" he muttered with a warming smile "I don't know" you said looking at the ground. "I have to go" Dante said walking away waving, you just waved back.
  15. You walked the rest of the way home thinking, thinking about what just happened. Dante was probably thinking the same but he was probably happy about it, somehow you were to. When you got home your parents weren't there, they were probably out somewhere, without you. You grabbed something to drink. You went to help Erik's family unpack. So you looked at the house next door, you never really looked at it before, it was really amazingly beautiful. You were going to knock on the door but it was already open, so you just knocked on it walking in and said "Hello" calmly. "Come in" a lady said. Then she walked into the living room where you were. She had bright fiery red hair, that was very gorgeous. She had pale skin, with bright blue eyes that complimented her hair. She was about your height 5'4-"˜5'0. Erik was probably taller than her. "Oh ______, nice to see you again. She said walking up to you and hugging you. "Nice to see you to" you replied. She was wearing a black jeans with a magenta colored blouse. "Erik's in his room painting it, the walls were so bland it was a dirty white so I told him he could paint it" his mom explained. "Oh I'll go and see him then" you said. "Its down the hall and the second room the right" she said. "Thanks" you said. You walked down the hall where a bunch of boxes were sitting there probably screaming to be unpacked.
  16. You knocked on the door it was closed. "Go away mom!" Erik yelled. "I'm not your mom" you said. "Oh, sorry!" he yelled back rushing to open the door. His face was red probably from being embarrassed. "Its ok" you said. You walked in it was empty besides the mix of orange and white on the wall. "Heyyyy" Erik said awkwardly. "Whats wrong?" you asked noticing that something was probably wrong. "Oh nothing" he said. "Tell me!" you yelled jokingly. "I saw you-" he didn't finish. "Saw me doing what?" you asked curiously. "I saw you making out with Dante" your face turned bright red. All you could think was "˜Why did people always see you kissing a guy' it made you seem like a sl*t but still they always see you. Adam and Dante saw you kissing Nathan, Nathan saw you kissing Adam, Your dad saw you kissing Nathan, and Erik caught you kissing Dante. Some luck you have.
  17. Okay there I made this part longer since the other one was shorter I hope that made you happy. Once again for the eleventh time Who Do You Like?

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