How cool could you get?!

I wanted to try a, you choose what happens next, kind of thing but ir REALLY didn't work lol... I realized it doesn't work with these kind of quizes...

But I hope you liked the story so far! please tell me if i should ontinue! i don't want to if nobody liked it. then igt's just a waste of time... ya know?

Created by: percyjackson
  1. OK, So this is how it's going to work, You're name is carter. you are 17 years old. (just go with it ok?) * mean you're thinking Hope this works...
  2. "maybe I shouldn't have come..." I said turning tword the door. "No1" She cried. She acted as if her life depended onit. "Look," She said," I jst need you to kiss me. "What?" I was so confussed, "Look Marta, You're a really nice girl b-" She started sobbing, "I just need yout ikk me!" "Why?" I asked. She just shook her head. "I need you to kiss me." "i'm sue there are plenty of guys out there who would give anything to kiss you b-" "NO!" She cried. "I need YOU to kiss me!" ,
  3. "Why me?" I ask. "You have to.. you just have to!" I shook my head. I felt really sorry for her. and weirded out at the same time. I looked around. Where the heck was I? I didn't remember this place at all... "Please..." she mutterd. Something struck me worse than pain. I summond up my curage and
  4. Kissed her. I epected just a peck then i'ed leave.But after each kiss I just wanted more! I got this feeling for her i'ed never had for anygirl before. yeah, i'ed had crushes on girls before. Even kissed a few. But this was so much more. I, I loved her. I couldn't leave now. What if I never saw her again? What if someother guy came along and won her over. No I wouldn't let that happen! I pulled away slowly and she shrunk to the floor. Her eyes were all red and puffy from crying. I crouched down in front of her. "I'm sorry." She wisperd, "i'm so sorry." "Why?""She just shook her head. She wouldn't meet my gaze anymore. I lifted her head so our eyes met. For a moment we stared at each other but sh elooked away as quickly as she looked up. "I'm so sorry." She said again. "Don't be." I sai dcuressing her face with my hands. "We should go." She said. "Ok." Then all of a sudden I rememberd my Mom and girlfriend Alice. What was I doing? Where the heck is this place? before I could think another thought I passed out.
  5. I woke up to the smell of waffles. i got up and looked around. It lookoed like I was in a mantion. Was this the place i was last night? Just then I heard a voice, a wisper behind my had, "carter" I=The voice worned, "carter, beware. Go home carter! run home Carter! run home! remember Alice." *Alice? Who's Alice?* I shook my head. "Marta?" I called while heading down the huge stair case.
  6. I heard a voice... No two voices, It was marta's and... I didn't recognize the other. "Marta, They're trying to contact him. They know what we've done. Our only hope is that he doesn't remember Alice. She'll bring back All of his memory. "marta?" I called again. "In here." She called back, I followed her voice into a HUDGE kitchen! "Whoa." I siad. "Guess what?" her face lit up, "We're millinares!" "What! How?" "Uh... I inherited it all from my parents. uh... They passed away." She looked sad i went over and gave her a hug, "I'm so sorry." "Oh well, at least we get all of there stuff!" We both laughed. You"re hairs a mess!" She giggled. She tryed to straiten it with her fingers. "Well, e have a pointment to get make overs at noon." By th elook on my face she added, "Don't worry, I wont let them put makeup on you." she tapped my nose. I smiled. She leend up and kissed me. I never really go ta good look at her before. She had a red curly hair. and brigth blue eyes. She looked like sh ecould be a model! But her cuteness took some of the intensity from her fetures.
  7. "Waffle?" She asked holding one up to me. She mustive been cooking. "yes, thanks." "No problem." We sat down togethor at the small kitvhen table instead of th ehuge one in the dinning room.
  8. If you're liking this so far please comment and rate! I know tis realy turned out to have almost nothing to do with the hole quiz thing.. it didn't really turn out. thank you SOOO much fro reading my work! tell me if i should continue or not. i don't want to continue if it isn't good ya know?
  9. Good,
  10. Bye!

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