to all my crazy friends!!!!!

Thread Topic: to all my crazy friends!!!!!

rachcab21
Joined: Jun 29, '09
Status: Novice
2009-11-17 23:32:57
Not only that. *sighs* It's hard 2 explain. I'm bad at explaining things, so... *listens 2 Mayday Parade - Three Cheers For Five Years*
Anastasia
Joined: Jun 11, '09
Status: Novice
2009-11-17 23:35:59
Aww, yeah me too. No one understands when I try to tell them how I feel. I've actually written a lot of random poetry lately
rachcab21
Joined: Jun 29, '09
Status: Novice
2009-11-17 23:37:39
yah. in fact, i've been writing poems about suicide and love mixing. it's a nice blend. *sighs* I feel like I wanna cry.
Anastasia
Joined: Jun 11, '09
Status: Novice
2009-11-17 23:39:53
*tries to cheer Rachy up* I feel the same way. It's funny even my good friends don't understand me anymore. I don't really think I'm crazy, just a little unwell
rachcab21
Joined: Jun 29, '09
Status: Novice
2009-11-17 23:42:51
at least i'm not the only 1. People these days! *cries* It's not them though...It's me! I could say mean things about myself right now! *cries in hands*
Anastasia
Joined: Jun 11, '09
Status: Novice
2009-11-17 23:46:23
Rachy you rock, really this isn't crazy because almost everyone our age feels like this sometimes. It really really sucks but it's gotta get better someday *sighs* I have no clue when but...
rachcab21
Joined: Jun 29, '09
Status: Novice
2009-11-17 23:49:00
yea. I made a song 4 this project of mine and it's about a book I'm reading. Wanna hear it? It's suicidal kinda.
Anastasia
Joined: Jun 11, '09
Status: Novice
2009-11-17 23:49:57
Sure I'd love to (just never actually hurt yourself. I need my friends)
rachcab21
Joined: Jun 29, '09
Status: Novice
2009-11-18 00:02:18
ha. K.

Verse 1
It was a nice day outside
Hating the fresh air
And u asked me for a walk to the park
Then I said "okay."
It was a short talk and a short walk
And it ended badly
So you'd walked away, wanting you, but I let you go sadly.

You wanted me to stay (you wanted me to stay)
but you knew I had left ( but you knew I had left)
it's already too late (it's already too late)
Because I'm gonna be dead! So...


Chorus
Don't be crying over me! (Don't be begging on your knees)
'Cause it's too late I'm going. I'm doing this for your life.

Don't be changing when I'm gone! (Hey I'm leaving before dawn)
It's alright leave me be, unless you wanna die with me.


Verse 2
You saw my letter
On my bedroom covers
Explaining why I left you
And my mood the other day.
I hope you'd felt better
Now that you know the truth.
I guess I was bluffing
'Cause everything was heart broken!

You wanted me to stay (you wanted me to stay)
but you knew I had left ( but you knew I had left)
it's already too late (it's already too late)
Because I'm gonna be dead! So...



That's what I have so far.
Anastasia
Joined: Jun 11, '09
Status: Novice
2009-11-18 00:06:28
I like it a lot, sort of reflects what I'm going through right now.
rachcab21
Joined: Jun 29, '09
Status: Novice
2009-11-18 00:08:56
thanks. it's about a guy having a disease that can spread, so he's trying to kill himself before anyone in the world gets it. he wants his love one to live and enjoy life while he would risk his life to save the world. it's sad.
Anastasia
Joined: Jun 11, '09
Status: Novice
2009-11-18 00:11:57
Yeah that is sad. I really like the way you write it, how it flows. I love when poetry tells a story and has a deeper meaning.
rachcab21
Joined: Jun 29, '09
Status: Novice
2009-11-18 00:15:47
thanks. i'm actually performing it for a class of mine. i hope they like it.
Anastasia
Joined: Jun 11, '09
Status: Novice
2009-11-18 00:18:35
That's great, for English we have to do a project and one of the choices was to write a song and I'm doing that too. Except it's supposed to be about Greek mythology. I want to bring my acoustic guitar in and play it, though I have to write it first.
rachcab21
Joined: Jun 29, '09
Status: Novice
2009-11-18 00:21:48
Cool. I love greek mythology. Oedipus...use to be a great greek hero. *sighs* He killed hios father and married his mother. How sad...*shivers* and sick! He f---in' did IT with his mother!!!!!
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