pssst pssst guys
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Thread Topic: pssst pssst guys
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that is so cute
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come on guys read about the gay lovers -
ew typos
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You should really separate the dialogue from the paragraphs. But all in all its good.
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That's not my writing style, though. If there's more than two consistent lines I do, but I'm not breaking for one. ty though
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