SING OUT LOUD!!!

Thread Topic: SING OUT LOUD!!!

teamjacob829
Joined: Jul 20, '09
Status: Novice
2009-07-21 12:33:49
how about this:
i close my eyes and wonder
what it would be like
to run around in lush green grass
with not a fear in sight

it was part of a peom i wrote for an english poem contest thing last year :)
rachcab21
Joined: Jun 29, '09
Status: Newbie
2009-07-22 11:33:20
Rock on! All those songs or poems sound awesome! Keep going! Don't be shy and just sing out loud!
Jtb1996
Joined: Jul 17, '09
Status: Novice
2009-07-22 11:48:22
yea well poems influenced songs so yea. ahh singing out loud??? i only sing out loud when im by myself. hmm i am phsyco. =D
teamjacob829
Joined: Jul 20, '09
Status: Novice
2009-07-22 12:07:14
i love to sing!! its so much fun. and just bc you sing doesnt mean your a phsyco
rachcab21
Joined: Jun 29, '09
Status: Newbie
2009-07-23 18:02:08
When I meant "sing out loud" I meant to sing to the open world and don't be shy, not actaully singing out loud. But thats pretty funny for people who think differently then me.
alltimelowluver
Joined: Jul 15, '09
Status: Novice
2009-07-23 21:18:21
alltimelowluver
Joined: Jul 15, '09
Status: Novice
2009-07-23 21:31:35
sorry for the blank 1... i wrote a poem cuz i was sad and depressed and its better than doing something else... but here it goes
you loved me and i love you.
how could this be?
you sent waves of darkness and drawned my heart.
but it survived.
you broke my heart and shattered it into tiny pieces.
but it became whole again.
you pierced my heart with a sharp dagger and killed it.
but the wound healed and and its alive again.
you hurt me in so many ways, killed my heart, and left it to die.
why does it keep suviving?
because i love you.
and i will always love you no matter what.
you put me through pain and made my life hell but i always run back to you.
i cant ever let you go.
you are my love and my life.
nothing can ever separate us.
we live off each other now.
so will you love me today? tomorrow? yesterday?
but the one thing i hope is that you love me always.
because i know i always will.
How was that???
teamjacob829
Joined: Jul 20, '09
Status: Novice
2009-07-23 22:15:08
wow. that was awesome!!!
rachcab21
Joined: Jun 29, '09
Status: Newbie
2009-07-23 22:19:57
That took my breath away alltimelowluver. I hope you keep writing more!
alltimelowluver
Joined: Jul 15, '09
Status: Novice
2009-07-24 10:28:54
haha! thanks! i thought it wasnt that good! lol! one of my friends laughed at it... ha what a friend...
Jtb1996
Joined: Jul 17, '09
Status: Novice
2009-07-24 10:53:28
wowza that poem alltime was pretty good! that part where its like u killed it and the heart keeps surviving because u love the person was AMAZING. =D
alltimelowluver
Joined: Jul 15, '09
Status: Novice
2009-07-24 12:53:17
haha! thanks guys!!! i wrote that cuz its true... and it still is... i keep going back...
rachcab21
Joined: Jun 29, '09
Status: Newbie
2009-07-24 17:53:31
I feel your pain. Suffering, my kind of thing.
alltimelowluver
Joined: Jul 15, '09
Status: Novice
2009-07-24 18:13:36
thats my thing to... i suffer for things that i shouldnt be suffering for... if that made sense... ugh now im confused!
rachcab21
Joined: Jun 29, '09
Status: Newbie
2009-07-24 18:21:49
Now your making me confuse.
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