You are Perfect ( rough draft for a song)

Thread Topic: You are Perfect ( rough draft for a song)

singforsongs
Joined: Oct 21, '17
Status: Newbie
I need suggestions of this song, and on scale of 1-10 you liked it. I put alot of effort, but this is a rough draft!


We could wait forever for bad to become good, we could wait forever to be heard, listened to, and understood. Society shut the door to every open mind. Its captured all our innocence, and we lost all the reasons to be kind. We are so cruel, youve been punctured, and your egos been deflated. I know what youre thinking, how could we ever change? You listen for behind the wall of your never ending doubt, but you will never see or hear it the same again, You started with a thick jacket on, but they slowly took off of you, by you bare, by you bare. I know, dare I say, that you missed the old times, when you laughed with them. Hatred grows inside of you everyday when you see them again. Pouring rain, they pushed you out without a jacket left.


Sweetheart, you arent perfect but within Jesuss and Gods beautiful eyes, you are their importance. You shouldnt be hurt by their words, as words have no meaning. Negativity is created by people who think they are misfits. They have no confidence, no matter HOW MUCH they think about it.

We are so cruel, youve been punctured, and your egos been deflated. I know what youre thinking, how could we ever change? You listen for behind the wall of your never ending doubt, but you will never see or hear it the same again!

Society shut the door to every open mind. Its captured all our innocence, and we lost all the reasons to be kind.

Sweetheart, you arent perfect but within Jesuss and Gods beautiful eyes, you are their importance. You shouldnt be hurt by their words, as words have no meaning. Negativity is created by people who think they are misfits. They have no confidence, no matter HOW MUCH they think about it.
Luv myself
Joined: Mar 1, '16
Status: Experienced
Holy crap 10!