Make your own story thread :P

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Scar
Joined: Jun 6, '10
Status: Novice
THE WOLF

[i]It was dark, too dark to even see, the moon and strs didn't give enough light, even though it was a full moon tonight. I stumbled through the bushes. My clan died, and i was left alone and for good. I was taught survuival skills from my cousins and brothers, but would it be enough to survive on my own. I didn't know, so i just kept walking. Beasts had attacked our village, and i could still remember my mother's face, twisted with sheer horror. She pulled me to her skirt, for me to look away from those savage animals. She rushed me out the back door, told me to run, to run far far away from here. I did as i told, stumbling and choking and sobbing on my own, getting scratched by the bushes and trees and tripping and sprawling into the dirt but going on. Soon when i was a distance away i heard a blood-curdling scream coming from the lips and voice of my own mother. I tried to go back, but stood still, just shaking and crying softly, hearing the beast sounds and roars and destruction. I fell to my knees, trembling in fear and choking in tears. It was a horrible night, but the next morning i was on the run to find another village. The nearest one was called Shukanesherash, and i stumbled in the direction it was, since we village children have to learn by heart the directions to go in an emergency. I was close, just a few miles more to go, when i heared a noise. Beast noises. I stood still, since i learned from Papa never to make a sound when a beast is near. Soon after a few silent minutes, an ugly red big frog crawled from a tree. The thing had bumps and warts over it and had orange striped on it. It was wide and had a snake tongue, and long legs and arms. Behind it a snake with spider legs slithered and crawled out. It was black but had mutliple green eyes like a spider had. I kept still, but trembled. I had no weapon but a spear i made by carving a sharp point of a stick with a stone. They looked at me, and lunged. I gasped and choked as they shoved me down and started to scratch me. I screamed and rolled and swat them with the stick, but they missed, and the frog leaped and bit my ankle reallly hard with a crunching sound. Blood gushed out of my leg and i screamed in agony. The snake-spider whacked me with its tail halfway in my scream so i choked instead. I whacked the frog and hit him this time, and he flew into the tree. I struggled up ignoring my pain and limping away. The snake screamed and jumped at me, biting my shoulder and ripping flesh off to the white bone of my shoulderblade. I screamed harder this time, kept screaming in tears and panic i struggled to harm it with my bare hand but couldn't do anything so i grabbed a stone nearby and whomped it again and again, the snake shrieking and squirming. The frog leaped at me again, and i was defensless now.
They were going to stab my haert with their claws and fangs when i heard a deep pure howl. A greyish shadowy figure jumped and tackled the two, biting and ripping more flesh. Another wolf leaped out of nowhere and wrestled the snake. The snake bit the wolf but it kept on, and soon blood poured out of the demons, and with tiny final screams they died. The wolf walked away, but looked at me curiously. They howled at the moon and sped off at the night. I stared at them, tears in eyes, and ran the rest of the way to the village.
Hatshepsut237
Joined: Jun 21, '10
Status: Newbie
Wow
Hatshepsut237
Joined: Jun 21, '10
Status: Newbie
It was a cold, damp, dark night. The moon shown full in the jet black sky. I sat in the tallest tree in the forest, staring up at the sky. I always did this during the full moon, I didn't know why but I did. I always wondered what was out there; magic, mystery, maybe even romance.
Scar
Joined: Jun 6, '10
Status: Novice
cool hat ^-^
Hatshepsut237
Joined: Jun 21, '10
Status: Newbie
I tore my gaze away from the moon and looked down at the forest floor. There, I saw someone limping. It was hard to tell who it was, but I knew that the person was in trouble.
Biance
Joined: Feb 10, '10
Status: Novice
This is like my 'Talk like a story' thread...
Scar
Joined: Jun 6, '10
Status: Novice
Whisper or Scream


It was a new day, i was on the train to see my grandfather. My parents were on a trip for their anniversery, and so i was sent to granfather's. At my stop i saw my grandfather like the last time i saw him. White hair, blue and greenish eyes, tall and muscular. He was in a black suit, and looked very unhappy. I do dislike my grandfather. He is strict and unhappy, mean and stubborn, and would shout in rage or hit you on the head if you talked back or disagreed with him. He had maids and lived in a larged mansion, but that didn't mean i could explore it. No, no,i was to be locked up in my room all day. I could do as i please often, but grandfather's strict rule was for me to stay out of his face,and so i obey.
He looked sternly at me as i walked down the train steps. "Ciela, keep your back straight!" He barked, and i obeyed quickly. He grabbed my writs and dragged me to another train that would stop near his mansion. On the way he kept saying how improper i looked and how my manners have turned worse. I wondered how that could be, because i was wearing my best blue dress and turquoise shawl i receieved from my aunt in christmas. And i wore silver and black boots that i shined and scrubbed before going on the train. I was also sitting straight and not slouching and gave polite remarks and was quiet and sitting properly. Again, my work was for nothing. When we arrived at the stop he smoothed his hair and dragged me out.
"It's a good day today, huh?" I say to him, only to get cuffed at the head.
"Celia," he roared. "Do not speak like that, it is a terrible day and you should ask about one's day than stating their day to them, goodness child where are you manners you little runt?" he barked.
"Yes grandfather," I replyed glumly, only to get a remark from him to keep my shoulders back again.
Scar
Joined: Jun 6, '10
Status: Novice
Really Binace? i'm sorry i didn't meanto copy you, will you join us?
Biance
Joined: Feb 10, '10
Status: Novice
Wait,nevermind,it's not. Sorry,didn't read the sub-title.
Hatshepsut237
Joined: Jun 21, '10
Status: Newbie
I jumped down to see that it was just a shadow. "My eyes must be playing tricks on me." I said to myself. I began the short walk home, my eyes never leaving the star filled sky.
Scar
Joined: Jun 6, '10
Status: Novice
Whisper or Scream

I brought my suitcase inside the house. It was dark and huge, with paintings and pots filled with flowers. I went up the staircase to my room. It looked the same as usual, one master bed and a painting of a ship on the wall, with lavender curtains and a fancy lamp on the nightstand. I undressed and put on a red dress with white stocking and tied a ribbon in my hair. I hated stockings but if i didn't wear them granfather would get into another fit.


After hours playing in the garden, I slumped into bed, dreaming off to sleep, when I hear a scream. The blood-curdling scream rattled and bounced off the halls. I jumped out of bed, but got my feet tangled in the bedsheets. I struggled and cried and finally broke free and tumbled off the bed. I hit the floor and gasped for breath, jumped up and ran through the halls when i tripped on something. It was a body. No. A [i]bloody body!
I screamed and everyone came running to see me on the bloody body of one of our maids named Rosa. Grandfather stared at me in fright. "You..you..killed Rosa," he gasped.
"No i didn't i-," i cried, but grandfather edged away and called the police.

Hours later i was in a cell. It wasn't my crime. I swear, I swear, swear it! Maybe i am becaomig insane, and i couldn't sleep well. I forced my self to shut my eyelids butevery time i did i saw her body, her [i[dead[/i] body. I shook in fear, sobbing all night, but drifted to sleep in my own tears. I wake up later to a howl, a snapping crunch and more screams. I slowly lift my eyelids to see a face with wide eyes and bloody twisted mouth looking at me. I yelped then screamed harder then cried in agony. A police officer ran forward to see the dead body, and he shook his head and called for back-up, looking at me as if i was the murderer. I didn't even have blood on my body or hand it wasn't me! It wasn't! And this so forth kept happening, someone died every day, and i was there with the body. It wasn't my fault though, i didn't do anything. But nobody believed me, and one day i get a note, that was slipped to me by a visitor. It said "WHISPER OR SCREAM" in blood, and as i read it an axe chopped my head.

THE END.
Hatshepsut237
Joined: Jun 21, '10
Status: Newbie
When I reached home silence greeted me. Not that I expected different, I was an orphan but I refused to leave te house that belonged to my family since the 1950s.
lilfreakgryl
Joined: Jul 17, '10
Status: Junior
timothy4444
Joined: Sep 13, '09
Status: Junior
It's meant to be an interactive adventure chapter on this website and I'm wondering if there is any mistakes

"INTRUDER ALERT! INTRUDER ALERT!" R.O.B Commanded.

While Krystal was shooting lasers out of her laser pistol Snake managed to head towards Krystal while expertly avoiding the lasers being shot at him managing to knock out Krystal. After Krystal was knocked out Kirby then decided to quickly inhale Krystal so he can follow Snake and gain Krystal's ability. After inhaling the body of Krystal (and making the body of Krystal exit through the top of his head) he started to gain some blue fur with two blue pointed ears sticking out on top of his head. Next Kirby grew a tail just like Krystal except the tail is slightly smaller to fit Kirby. After the transformation is complete Kirby quickly then followed Snake inside the Great Fox

Inside the Great Fox Snake and Kirby were running for their lives struggling to run away from the R.O.B and avoiding his lasers from the robot's eyes. Having no idea how to defeat R.O.B, Snake got out his codec and called Otacon while still running.

Otacon: "So, Snake, you're fighting Robot?"
Snake: "Yeah, it's a robot. Although, couldn't they have come up with a better name?"
Otacon: "Actually, in the U.S. they called him 'R.O.B.' Robot, R.O.B.--take your pick."
Snake: "Fine. R.O.B. it is, then."
Otacon: "In North America, R.O.B.'s body was grey. But in Japan, he had a white body and red arms."
Snake: "You sure know your geeky tech stuff, Otacon but I need know how do you close down R.O.B.?"
Otacon: "To be able to shut down the robot you must send out signals which would order it to shut down. As I see Kirby has inhaled Krystal and gained her ability."
Snake: "What does that have to do with anything?"
Otacon: "Krystal has to ability to send signals and to read through peoples minds. If you can convince Kirby to use this ability then maybe R.O.B will shut down. All you got to do is convince Kirby."
Snake: "Got it."

After finding a suitable hiding place Snake whispered to Kirby.

"I want you to listen up very carefully. I want you to use your ability to find out the frequency channel of R.O.B."

"Puyo!" screamed Kirby excitedly which caused R.O.B. to find them and to find another hiding place before they get hit with lasers.

After running nonstop and dodging all the lasers that the R.O.B has fired at them the two have managed to find another hiding place.

"Next time don't blow my cover." Snake whispered to Kirby, "You know what to do now."

After Snake was finished speaking Kirby then tested his new ability and concentrated really hard. After a few seconds later the R.O.B. suddenly went slower and eventually shut down.

"Puyo!!!!" Kirby yelled excitedly.

"Nice job marshmellow! Now all we need is to find the Main port." said Snake.

Just then a voice can be heard somewhere nearby. It was...
catherine99
Joined: Sep 29, '10
Status: Novice
What Happened?

I stared into the sky, waiting for something to happen. I sat up in my bed. Screams... Screams! No. No no no! Something is out there again. The evilness. The creepiness. "No! Get away!" I yelled. Loud thumps on the ground. Knock knock knock "Get away!" I yelled once more. The door slightly opens. I hide under the covers. Something hovers over me with a hot breath.

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