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Title: A New Adventure
Let's go explore a bit." you say.
"OK! Maybe we can find our way back home." Sora exclaims.
You and Sora then headed North with you looking out for any interesting scenery that might take you and Sora back to your own world while Sora lead the way. As you two walked, Sora noticed that his Keyblade was beginning to glow a light yellow colour, and in an instant you both stop to see what is happening to the Keyblade.
"Something's happening to my Keyblade and it's starting to get a bit warmer." mentioned Sora as he drops the Keyblade as he can't handle holding the Keyblade anymore.
You both stop, and as the Keyblade starts getting brighter you both cover your eyes as the light of the keyblade is just too bright to look at. A moment later you both pass out.
Where do you both wake up?
Option #1: In Wonderland falling down a hole
Option #2: Other -
Title: Down the Rabbit Hole
When you regain consciousness you and Sora find yourself falling down a hole... quite a peculiar hole in fact. Fortunately you've watched Disney's version of "Alice in Wonderland" and it's 2010 sequel about 3 times. Unfortunately the both of you weren't floating down like Disney's movie, instead the both of you were falling like the sequel. As you and Sora were falling down at a great pace, you could see lots of weird things that were studded. Mirrors, stoves, pianos, clocks and other everyday appliances are studded onto the wall. Your speed gradually gets slower and as you and Sora touch the ground it seems like you were floating down.You got to your feet and looked around the room. You look around and see that you're in a round room with red and pink checker tiled floor and wallpaper, and four couches of different colours surrounding you and Sora.
"Oh my fur and whiskers! I'm late, I'm late, I'm late!" screamed a white rabbit who was running towards a hallway leading to another room, looking at his unusually large watch, wearing a red jacket.
'Oh dear, oh dear, oh dear! I'm here, I should be there!" The rabbit said again not noticing you or Sora, "I'm late, I'm late, I'm late! The queen, she'll have my head for sure!"
You were still holding your Katana and Sora still had his Keyblade in his hand but you and Sora wondered.
What was he late for?
Option #1: Follow the rabbit
Option #2: Other -
Kish NoviceUh, guys i have a story 2 tell, it happened to a friend of a friend of mine, i don't know whether you will believe it. I wrote it like it happened to me so you understand better! Here it is:
HUMANS CAN LICK TOO!!!
It was a saturday, my mom and dad had gone to a meeting, or something like that, and woudn't be back till 7 the next morning. I was left alone in the house with my dog, a cocker spaniel. So at around 12 i went upstairs to sleep, my dog following me at my heels. I lied down on my bed, and my dog was just beneath. I have a habit, that whenever i can't sleep, i let my hand fall and my dog licks it. This somehow makes me fall asleep. Yeah, so at 12 i coudn't sleep so i let my hand fall and my dog licked it. At around 1, i woke up. I have no idea why. Then i heard a sound comming from the bathroom, like, drip drip, like someone left the tap on alittle. No problem, i thought, and let my hand fall, and my dog licked it. I woke up again at around 2 and still heard alittle of the sound, drip drip, and i still thought it was ok. I let my hand fall and my dog licked it. It was now 6 when i woke up, my parents were going to be back at 7. I got up and went to the bathroom to turn off the tap, and got the shock of my life! There, hanging on the bulb, with its head cut off was... my dog! The drip drip i heard wasn't the tap, it was the dogs blood! Shocked like hell, i ran to my bed to where the dog was, and found a note written in blood, it said HUMANS CAN LICK TOO!!!
Well thats the story, told u it was kinda hard to believe! Tell me what u think guys/girls!!! -
@Kish Woah! I find it hard to believe.
Title: Woah! It talks?
Hey, wait!" You called to him, pacing after him leaving Sora to follow you.
The flustered rabbit swung open a door. He scurried through the door, screaming, "I'm late! I'm late!"
His voice echoed, as he ran further and further away. You couldn't see the rabbit anymore, and you assumed he wasn't very far, so you decided to keep trailing after him.
You peeked into the door the strange rattled rabbit had left open behind him-- wait, there were two larger doors overlapping a smaller door. Three doors for one entrance? What's the point? You thought for a moment, as you started twisting the door nobs in confusion. You regained your focus, and you and Sora entered the room.
You and Sora stepped into a perfectly rectangular room. It had a small round table in the middle of it and fold-able bed on the right, with doors of many diverse sizes that surrounded the perimeter. The door sizes were very odd. Some were smaller than others, wider, narrower, larger, and all sorts of different sizes. You turned the nob of a door to the left that was closest to you, and pushed and pulled, but it wouldn't budge. You tried the same with many other doors, but not a single door would open.
You look around the room and kick the bed causing it to reveal a secret passage that was far too small for you to enter.
Where's that really tiny yellow door, You think to yourself when you see Sora looking at a small yellow door that was slightly open. You instantly recognize the golden doorknob on the yellow door as the talking doorknob that greeted Alice in the movie. You quickly rush over to the yellow door where Sora is.
"How did he get so small?" he asks himself as he examines the door not noticing the face on the doorknob.
"No, you're simply too big." replied the doorknob.
"It talks!" Sora screamed.
"Must you be so loud? You woke me up. I need a bit more sleep." replied the doorknob who was about to snooze off when Sora stopped him from doing so.
"Wait, what do we have to do to grow small?" asked Sora.
"Why don't you try the bottle... over there?" the doorknob stated while gesturing towards the table and to your surprise, two bottles along with 2 cups suddenly appeared on the table. Both of the bottles had labels saying Drink Me! but the colour of the labeling were different. You don't know if you should try the blue one or the orange one.
Where will this story go next? Your choices are below...
*STAR* You have the following choices: *STAR*
1. Try the Blue One *
2. Try the Orange One
* indicates the next chapter is blank and needs to be created.
© Copyright Timothy4444 (UN: timothy444 at Writing.Com). All rights reserved. -
Chapter 12: Growing Small (ID #1066989)
an addition by: Timothy4444 (1)
You decide to try the orange bottle on the table. After you poured the contents of the orange bottle into the two cups evenly, you and Sora grab a cup and gulp down the contents of the drink.
Lightheadedness strikes you for a second, suddenly everything around you is gigantic.... actually you and Sora shrunk to the size of the bottle.
Disorientated you looked around the room, the once small table now looks like a tower now, A door that was no bigger than your hand is over 4 times your size now and the bottles that were on the table were now the exact same size as you are now.
"Wha...What?!" you stammered while looking around.
Even through you were the size of an large insect, at least you can proceed outside the room and besides; Sora is also shrunk and everything that is attached to you is now shrunk with you.
Suddenly a swarm of Heartless that is the exact same height as you appear and you decide to fight them. They were easy to kill but you realize that with the Heartless now in Wonderland, you'll never know how Wonderland has changed with these creatures lurking about...
Where will this story go next? Your choices are below...
You have the following choices:
1. Go through the hidden doorway
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Chapter Title: Law and Order
You and Sora both magically outside the Queen's Castle where a court session is about the start. There were a flight of stairs to the left and the right which in the middle stood the Queen on the top and Alice on the bottom of the platforms. Several playing card soldiers were guarding the area in case someone disrupted it. It was quite neat indeed as the grass has been finely chopped to a appropriate level. As you observe some more you see the white rabbit now running on top of the left flight of chairs, he was now holding a trumpet.When he reached the top he played a short royal tune then he declared, "Court is now in session!".
"I'm on trial? But why?" asked Alice.
"Her majesty, the Queen of Hearts, presiding!" exclaimed the white rabbit. The queen stood up, looked at Alice, and then started speaking.
"This girl is the culprit. There's no doubt about it." The queen explained, "And the reason is... because I say so, that's why!"
"That is so unfair!" complained Alice.
"Well, have you anything to say in your defence?" asked the queen.
"Of course!" replied Alice, "I've done absolutely nothing wrong. You may be queen, but I'm afraid that doesn't you the right to be so... so mean!"
"Silence!" yelled the queen.
Meanwhile while you were watching the court session, Sora started talking to you,
"Hey, [your name], we should help her out."
Yeah, but the..." you thought for a second before continuing, "We're outsiders, so wouldn't that be mu-meddling? Something bad could happen to us."
Sora just stared at Alice...
Where will this story go next? Your choices are below...
You have the following choices:
1. Sora goes up and defends Alice
2. You manage to stop Sora * -
*cough* 1 *cough*
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This choice: Sora goes up and defends Alice
Chapter 14: Interfering the Queen's Court
The queen finished her court session, "The court finds the defendant, guilty as charged! For the crimes of assault and attempted theft of my heart... OFF WITH HER HEAD!!!!!". Several of the Playing Card soldiers were surrounding Alice.
Sora was preparing to defend Alice. You tried to warned him not to mess things up by talking to him about the consequences of messing things up.
"No! No! Oh, please!" Alice pleaded interrupting your talking.
"Hold it right there!" Sora interrupted running towards Alice while knocking over the Playing Card soldiers.
"Who are you?" asked the queen, "How dare you interfere with my court?"
"Excuse me. But we know who the real culprit is!" explained Sora, "Anyway, she's not the one you're looking for."
OMG! He even included in his mess? you think.
"That's nonsense. Have you any proof?" the queen asked while Alice was being put in a big yellow cage.
"Uh..." stuttered Sora.
"Bring me evidence of Alice's innocence! Fail, and it's off with all of your heads! Gather as much or little evidence as you please. Report back here once you're ready." said the queen.
Where to look first?
Where will this story go next? Your choices are below...
You have the following choices:
1. Around the Queen's Castle
2. Away from the Queen's Castle -
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smartgirl115 NewbieOmce upon a time, there was an ogre, named Shrek. When he was little, he witnessed his father stabbing his mother with a homemade knife.He stood there, with tears in his eyes. His dad approached him, and said "Why so serious?" Then, he used his knife to "put a smile on his son's face, which left nothing but a permanent scar. Ever since that day, he had chronic nightmares about that horrible incident, especially as an adult. His friends Donkey and Puss-in-Boots advised Shrek to go to therapy, but he refused. Instead, the ogre committed suicide by piercing his late father's homemade knife into his stomach. Blood was gushing everywhere. The ogre took a few last breaths, and died. That's the END of that!
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freakvoice3 NewbieTo Kish's post:
WOAH! I would've freaked out. I would've started crying and screaming. -
@Smartgirl115 That's a good short story. 8/10
Chapter 15: The Cheshire Cat
Since you don't want to look around the Queen's Castle you decide to go away from the castle. You and Sora exit through the left into a forest.
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The both of you enter the forest. The forest seemed really large as the grass was three times bigger than you and there were lotus trees? Anyway before you can think anymore suddenly a purple head that was smiling suddenly started appearing and disappearing until the remaining of it's body started appearing which then the body started putting back its head in. It was the Cheshire cat that you've seen in the movies.
"Who are you?" asked Sora.
"Who, indeed?" the Cheshire Cat commented, "Poor Alice. Soon to lose her head, and she's not guilty of a thing."
"Hey, if you know who the culprit is, tell us!" you shouted.
"The Cheshire Cat has all the answers... but doesn't always tell. The answer, the culprit, the cat all lie in darkness." The Cheshire Cat started fading away slowly.
"Wait!" shouted Sora.
"They've already left the forest. I won't tell which exit. There are four pieces of evidence in all. Three are a cinch to find. The fourth is tricky. Big reward if you find them all." The Cheshire cat was barely visible.
"Should we trust him?" you ask to Sora.
Instead of Sora saying anything, the Cheshire Cat instead replied his last sentences before he completed vanished, "To trust, or not to trust? I'll trust you'll de..."
Immediately after the Cheshire Cat faded away you see a group of soldier heartless patrolling the forest. You and Sora go down in battle and start getting into battling and you start destroying them all. After you and Sora defeat the heartless you...
Where will this story go next?
You have the following choices:
1. Explore the Area with Sora
2. Oh Look! A Pretty Flower... :D -
:O I forot about his for three days
Or, maybe you did
tsk tsk tsk...........either way a story of epic proportions was posponed and I'm pretty sure I spelt both p words wrong
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Chapter 16: Claw Marks
As you are about to follow Sora again your eyes stop at a pretty yellow flower that stands out in the forest. You ignore that flower and get going to follow Sora in finding evidence. As you search the ground for evidence you accidentally stumble upon some claw marks which look strangely unnatural. Uncomfortable with the claw marks you tap Sora on the shoulder and tell him about the claw marks you have just found.
"We better get these claw marks as part of our evidence." said Sora who was grabbing a red box.
Now since you've got one piece of evidence, maybe the Queen of hearts would believe that Alice is innocent.
Where will this story go next? Your choices are below...
You have the following choices:
1. Go Show your Evidence
2. Keep Searching!
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