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dragon ember
Joined: Aug 1, '10
Status: Advanced | 2012-02-11 21:09:44 |
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I am alone my insides are bleeding tears are going down my face I wish someone would love me my heart is bleeding and tearing apart I wish I would find the wolf who loves me I howl hoping that someone would hear me all I could do now is wait | |
takos_rule
Joined: Jun 15, '11
Status: Junior | 2012-02-11 21:23:07 |
| :o Really good Ember.. That made a little movie in my mind x) | |
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dragon ember
Joined: Aug 1, '10
Status: Advanced | 2012-02-11 21:59:32 |
| a movie? WHAT DO YOU MEAN A F**KING MOVIE!!! THAT IS HOW I REALLY FEEL!!! NO ONE EVER TAKES ME SERIOUSLY!!! EVER! X tries hard not to cry X | |
Alana
Joined: Jan 30, '10
Status: Senior | 2012-02-11 22:01:39 |
| No, by 'a movie in my mind' Takos merely means that the poem was very effective to the point that we can visualize what it is the poem is trying to convey. | |
Kitsune
Joined: May 30, '10
Status: Experienced | 2012-02-11 22:01:59 |
| she means that when she read it, a little scene played in her head by what was written | |
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dragon ember
Joined: Aug 1, '10
Status: Advanced | 2012-02-11 22:07:52 |
| ... I'm sorry, I was am just really sad | |
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dragon ember
Joined: Aug 1, '10
Status: Advanced | 2012-02-12 15:41:37 |
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Sisi
Joined: Aug 24, '10
Status: Experienced | 2012-02-24 18:34:41 |
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Carri04
Joined: Jun 15, '09
Status: Hot Shot | 2012-02-24 18:51:55 |
| Maybe the reason people don't take you seriously is because you act like that... |
