Poem
Thread Topic: Poem
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rachcab21
Joined: Jun 29, '09
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2009-08-04 16:39:01 |
| Wow! I hope no one steals that from you. You're pretty good. | |
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Bambi
Joined: Mar 30, '09
Status: Novice |
2009-08-05 15:47:57 |
| Whoa, that was awesome! 0.0 | |
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Anastasia
Joined: Jun 11, '09
Status: Novice |
2009-08-15 18:01:26 |
| Here's a pretty song we sang in choir for contest last year: Waters ripple and flow drifting to the sea gentle falling stream ever calling to me gentle falling stream ever calling to me Waters ripple and flow rushing to the sea rivers deep and wide ever calling to me rivers deep and wide ever calling to me Can you hear the river? Can you hear the sea? Joining with the earth in a song of peace... It goes on a little from there and I can't remember but it sounds better when you sing it. |
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nessie14
Joined: Aug 19, '08
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2009-08-15 19:02:46 |
| ooh, sounds peaceful. thanks, guys! | |
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nessie14
Joined: Aug 19, '08
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2009-08-15 19:07:39 |
| oh here's another i wrote called "inspiration": i'm lying here on my bed notebook in one hand, pen in the other. trying to think of a poem or song to write down right here, on this paper. waiting for an inspiration to jump to my fingers and write itself down i know that its there, that little inspiration. poor thing must be shy, hiding back in my mind. im chewing my pen now, thinking real hard, trying to meditate, anything to coax that inspiration. i try to think of meaningful things like friends and life, love and death. still, there is nothing, maybe it just needs some time. i'll give it a break, as i put down my pen... |
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rachcab21
Joined: Jun 29, '09
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2009-08-16 00:49:00 |
| WOW! You guys are REALLY GOOD! Way better than me! You guys should join in a poetry contest! I did and I usually be in 3rd place. | |
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nessie14
Joined: Aug 19, '08
Status: Novice |
2009-08-16 09:29:15 |
| i've tried, i cant seem to find that many. i've looked online, but a lot of them limit how many lines, and i'm always over. | |
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rebekahgilman
Joined: Mar 18, '09
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2009-08-16 22:11:31 |
| Okay, well this is now a poetry contest! Best poem wins, and I'll mention them in my next quiz? Yeah! that'll be the prize! Write awayyyyy!!!! | |
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rachcab21
Joined: Jun 29, '09
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2009-08-21 01:41:28 |
| Awesome Rebeka! Thats a good idea! | |
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alltimelowluver
Joined: Jul 15, '09
Status: Novice |
2009-08-21 12:59:26 |
| umm heres the poem i wrote before in another forum: it doesnt have a name... you loved me and i love you. how could this be? you sent waves of darkness and drawned my heart. but it survived. you broke my heart and shattered it into tiny pieces. but it became whole again. you pierced my heart with a sharp dagger and killed it. but the wound healed and and its alive again. you hurt me in so many ways, killed my heart, and left it to die. why does it keep suviving? because i love you. and i will always love you no matter what. you put me through pain and made my life hell but i always run back to you. i cant ever let you go. you are my love and my life. nothing can ever separate us. we live off each other now. so will you love me today? tomorrow? yesterday? but the one thing i hope is that you love me always. because i know i always will. |
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rachcab21
Joined: Jun 29, '09
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2009-08-23 02:19:19 |
| Oh, yeah! I remember that poem! It's a awesome poem alltime. | |
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alltimelowluver
Joined: Jul 15, '09
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2009-08-24 11:34:43 |
| haha thanks! | |
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nessie14
Joined: Aug 19, '08
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2009-08-26 19:19:37 |
| i like it too! | |
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alltimelowluver
Joined: Jul 15, '09
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2009-08-27 10:39:09 |
| woo! more likererers!!! hahaha! | |
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Bambi
Joined: Mar 30, '09
Status: Novice |
2009-08-27 13:00:04 |
| Wow, there are some good poets here! I'll have a try now: A special world for you and me, A special bond one connot see, It wraps us up in its cobweb, And holds us fiercley in its womb, It's fingers spread like find spun gold, Gentley nestling us to the rold, Like silken thread it holds us fast, Bonds like this are meant to last, And though at times a thread may break, A new one forms in it's wake, To bind us closer and keep us strong, In a special world, where we belong. A special someone inspired it. ;) |
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