Poetry Contest

Thread Topic: Poetry Contest

Bambi
Joined: Mar 30, '09
Status: Novice
2009-11-30 14:29:00
LoL we usually go random after the first couple of posts and I guess Jakey is feeling the emptiness of his random pot. LoL
rachcab21
Joined: Jun 29, '09
Status: Novice
2009-12-02 00:21:52
Hahaha. That's funny! I use 2 call Jtb that! Hahaha! That's so weird!

But yah, we always go random. Hahaha.
I like music
Joined: Oct 26, '09
Status: Newbie
2009-12-02 05:52:44
I like randomness.
I like pink.
rachcab21
Joined: Jun 29, '09
Status: Novice
2009-12-04 01:29:11
Here's a poem I made. Kinda deep. Well, 2 me it is. Hope u guys like it.


I Hate...


I hate racists.
I hate being dumb.
I hate marshmallows.
I hate preppy girls.
I hate being depress.
I hate cutting myself.
I hate it when my friends r sad.
I hate it when people r made fun of.
I hate it when people gossip or spread rumors.
I hate it when ur heart gets broken.
I hate it when ur left alone.
I hate it when time goes by fast.
I hate it when I get hurt.
I hate it when I 4get things.
I hate it when I miss something 2 much.
I hate getting distracted.
I hate being confusing.
I hate the color pink.
I hate it when there is competition.
I hate it when I talk 2 much.
I hate it when I don't get what I want.
I hate it when I hav no1 2 talk 2.
I hate it when I hate things.
I hate it when I'm not done with my homework.
I hate it when i get mad.
I hate it when it snows.
I hate it when I'm serious and make things boring.
I hate it when I don't make sense.
I hate it when I run away from home.
I hate being bad.
I hate regretting what I've done.
I hate being a loser.
I hate it when someone tries helping me out when I'm busy crying.
I hate it when I don't get the attention.
I hate lying.
I hate being nervous.
I hate it when I'm bored.
I hate it when I miss something.
I hate being forgotten.
I hate being unfortunate.
I hate keeping secrets.
I hate it when the person u like doesn't know u like him/her.
I hate it when I can't sing in public like in the library, which I do all the time.
I hate it when I do something wrong.
I hate it when my ink pen doesn't work.
I hate it when people go gay.
I hate bringing the mood down.
I hate being hated.
I hate it when people hurts someone's feelings or physically.
I hate it when I'm gone 4 a long time.
I hate being called something that I'm not.
I hate it when people know how I'm really feeling when i say, "I'm okay."
I hate it when I be clumsy.
I hate it when I don't get a answer.
I hate it when people leave me.
I hate people dying.
I hate people crying because it makes me cry.
I hate it when people don't do the right things.
I hate getting in2 trouble.
I hate it when people ask me questions I don't know the answer 2.
I hate it when I can't listen 2 my music.
I hate that I can't travel.
I hate it when I break a promise.
I hate it when I think about myself all the time.
I hate being weird.
I hate it when I don't know how 2 explain things when I know the answer to it.
I hate it when I go through a really rough time in life.
I hate it when I worry 2 much.
I hate it when things don't work out.
I hate it when people r not serious on a specific topic.
I hate it when I'm not in the mood of something.
I hate it when I'm busy.
I hate it when I break the chain (hope u guys know what it means).
I hate it when I'm not me.
I hate it when I say that I was gonna do something, but I really didn't.
I hate it when I say I hate life.
Zacrocks02
Joined: Sep 7, '09
Status: Newbie
2009-12-04 03:46:35
dang rush! r u writin a story!? dang! i can't read dat all.
I like music
Joined: Oct 26, '09
Status: Newbie
2009-12-04 04:32:44
I didn't bother either.
I only reached 'I hate the color pink' and I stopped.
And when i said I liked pink, I meant the SINGER!!!!!!
Or did you know I meant her? *Turns on MP3 playes to listen to Funhouse*
Carri04
Joined: Jun 15, '09
Status: Novice
2009-12-04 23:57:04
Wow most people on this site are so lazy, I actually took the time to read all that.....man you hate a lot of things, where's the love?
I like music
Joined: Oct 26, '09
Status: Newbie
2009-12-05 02:29:31
Carri's right, you made a list of what you hate, make a list of what you love, if there is anything you do love anyway. (Hee Hee)
I like music
Joined: Oct 26, '09
Status: Newbie
2009-12-06 10:58:04
It's been two days and you still haven't made that list, Rush.
Bambi
Joined: Mar 30, '09
Status: Novice
2009-12-06 11:46:34
Where's the love, Rachy? Like Carri said.
I like this one:
"I hate it when I can't sing in public like in the library, which I do all the time."
Jtb1996
Joined: Jul 17, '09
Status: Novice
2009-12-06 12:12:26
this one was good: I hate it when people know how I'm really feeling when i say, "I'm okay."
and "i hate when ppl go gay" i read it all its not that much.
Jtb1996
Joined: Jul 17, '09
Status: Novice
2009-12-06 12:16:24
idk i made this one once:

"Little butterfly peeks out its cacoon
its small fragile feet pulls it out
but it stops and struggles
a boy feels pity and takes it out

he thought he helped but he only hurt it
the butterfly flaps its delicate wings
but cant take off
its scarred badly

the boy comes along and is shocked
the buttefly lies dead on the leaf
it couldn't take off
and neither can he

the guilt, the mistakes, cant take off"
Carri04
Joined: Jun 15, '09
Status: Novice
2009-12-06 22:49:39
Man you must suck at rhyming
Carri04
Joined: Jun 15, '09
Status: Novice
2009-12-06 23:04:51
Ok I'm making this on the spot

As the teardrop came down
Upon her face came a frown
She asks me "Where is the love?"
Where as you all push and shove
Before the end you must make amends
With a long lost soul, called a friend....

Tada? You can be soulful and rhyme, GET A RHYMING DICTIONARY!

NO PLAGURIZING!
I like music
Joined: Oct 26, '09
Status: Newbie
2009-12-07 11:50:27
That was a nice poem, Carri.
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